Monday 19 May 2014

By Harry


A man riding in muddy water
He is feeling cold and tired
He can smell fresh air and dirty water
He can taste the sea water
Coming home from the beach
He's probably going to get changed when he gets home
because he's very wet.
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  1. Unknown21 May 2014 at 21:33

    Lovely writing Harry, I liked how the man could taste the sea water - it reminded me of when I go to the beach and can taste the salt. I also enjoyed how this finished - it made me laugh - you're right, he probably will have to get changed!

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