Suddenly an ear-splitting roar shook the canopy of trees around me. The mighty jaguar was on to me; I imagined his fangs tearing at my flesh. I hid in the bush, hoping he wouldn't find me.
I peeked out and a flash of black shot past me. Little frogs jumped around in the canopy of trees.
"A poison dart frog," I thought.
There was a hissing sound up in the trees as a tree snake dropped down. It looked at the bushes and slithered away stealthily.
Showing posts with label small moments big details. Show all posts
Showing posts with label small moments big details. Show all posts
Tuesday, 9 September 2014
by Jamie
The freezing cold water | by Nolan
I shuddered as I dipped my foot into the freezing cold water. For some reason I thought it was hot although I was shivering. A whistle blew. I regained my senses and swam. Everyone was 1 lap ahead. Anyway I came second in the end. But of all the races, 1st, yay!
So after that I searched for my mum. I knew she was there. Finally I found her. The first thing I said was, "Can I go home?"
Obviously she said, "No, it's only halfway through school!"
"Awww!" I moaned.
30 minutes later, on the bus, I felt relaxed and relieved but tired.
So after that I searched for my mum. I knew she was there. Finally I found her. The first thing I said was, "Can I go home?"
Obviously she said, "No, it's only halfway through school!"
"Awww!" I moaned.
30 minutes later, on the bus, I felt relaxed and relieved but tired.
Labels:
Nolan,
show not tell,
small moments big details,
writing
Friday, 14 March 2014
Can you guess what this is...? | By Francesca
Sharp spiky rocks form up
from the hard surface.
A dark black path
leads beneath the hill.
At the front it looks like
a giant snail shell
crawling across the rocky sand.
A slim pokey stick
sneaks out the back.
It's like a mini
microphone!
from the hard surface.
A dark black path
leads beneath the hill.
At the front it looks like
a giant snail shell
crawling across the rocky sand.
A slim pokey stick
sneaks out the back.
It's like a mini
microphone!
Thursday, 13 March 2014
The shining rock | By Quinn
The rock shines so much I can't see
because it is so sparkly.
It looks like a crystal
it could be marble.
I wonder if it's a crystal
or marble?
because it is so sparkly.
It looks like a crystal
it could be marble.
I wonder if it's a crystal
or marble?
Monday, 17 February 2014
So much depends...
Last week our poem of the week was William Carlos Williams' poem, The Red Wheelbarrow:
so much depends
upon
the red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
Over the weekend, Saoirse wrote her own version. Here it is!
so much depends
upon
the red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
Over the weekend, Saoirse wrote her own version. Here it is!
Labels:
poetry,
Saoirse,
small moments big details
Thursday, 13 February 2014
New Zealand/ Nature’s Omelette | poem by Avie
Yesterday Lola and Kate found a strange nest-like object on the way to school. It sort of looked like a kina, mixed with a hedgehog, mixed with a nest (without the hollow in the middle). We wrote some observations in our writers' journals about it which we'll use as inspiration for a poem next week.
By coincidence, today Avie came and showed us a poem he'd written after seeing a bunch of pohutukawa blossoms stuck together. He's a poet as well as a musician and a fabulous caretaker!
New Zealand/ Nature's Omelette
Fallen pohutukawa flowers
saffron on the fried earth.
The sun is the egg
a yellow circumference…
A pinch of black seed
and a tablespoon of light
rain.
The lemons fall from the tree
with a sprinkle of parsley…
Nature’s blossom weaves a
fabric
together like whitebait
patties
cooking slowly.
The wind whisks together
all summer day long
turning once white/golden
when the sun is beaten and
left to run
too late in the scorching
heat.
Flipped over underneath the
folds
the crimson blossom burns
towards the end of season…
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