I shuddered as I dipped my foot into the freezing cold water. For some reason I thought it was hot although I was shivering. A whistle blew. I regained my senses and swam. Everyone was 1 lap ahead. Anyway I came second in the end. But of all the races, 1st, yay!
So after that I searched for my mum. I knew she was there. Finally I found her. The first thing I said was, "Can I go home?"
Obviously she said, "No, it's only halfway through school!"
"Awww!" I moaned.
30 minutes later, on the bus, I felt relaxed and relieved but tired.
Showing posts with label show not tell. Show all posts
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Tuesday, 9 September 2014
Monday, 8 September 2014
Marina's story | By Mahinaz
I take one last look back at our house. I try to remember the whole house and the stuff in it. I hope Gleam and Glow are okay in their fishpond. I think I will miss the big oak tree because I remember when I climbed it. The flower garden was growing very well and very high. I'll remember the back window and the wooden house. I feel sad for two reasons, because I don't want to leave the house and I don't want to leave Gleam and Glow behind. Another reason we are sad is because we have to look for Dad and find him and then help him. I hope we find Dad very quickly.
This was written after reading the beginning of Gleam and Glow, a story of a family forced to flee in the Bosnian conflict. This piece is written from the perspective of one of the children in the family.
This was written after reading the beginning of Gleam and Glow, a story of a family forced to flee in the Bosnian conflict. This piece is written from the perspective of one of the children in the family.
Tuesday, 27 May 2014
Cross country day | by Ella
I woke up thinking it was a
normal day. Mum called, “it’s breakfast time, Ella!” I stumbled out of bed.
Charlie was chatting away about his lego ship.
“It’s cross country!”
I shivered.
I shivered.
“It… it… it’s… cro…ss…
country?!”
I picked the last blueberry
out of my bowl.
“Yes,” said Mum as I put my
bowl up at the bench.
After I had gotten dressed,
brushed my hair and was getting my shoes on I had butterflies in my tummy. We
arrived at school, did the roll, and got our bags on. You can do it! I thought
to myself.
The bus pulled up. The closer
we got the more nervous I got.
3 hours later…
3…2…1… GO! Suddenly everyone
zoomed past leaving me behind. 7…8…6…5…4! 4th! I have never run this fast before!
“Here come the bushes!” I was in the forest now.
I stumbled over a big root and I hurt my ankle. I kept on going. The air smelt
musty. I felt a pain going down my back. Then I saw a clearing and heard people
clapping. Tenth now. In a few minutes I was over the fence and had crossed the
finish line! I waited for Sophia and clapped when I saw her.
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