Thursday, 13 March 2014

The shining rock | By Quinn

The rock shines so much I can't see
because it is so sparkly.

It looks like a crystal
it could be marble.

I wonder if it's a crystal
or marble?

6 comments:

  1. Hi Quinn
    Great poem and good use of your imagination and words.
    Lookig forward to the next one.
    Love Gar xxx

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    1. I've already written the next one! It's about the wind. I wrote it straight after Touch on Thursday because it was very windy! ~ Quinn

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  2. Loving the blog, great work from you all. Quinn, fantastic poem. I wonder if collecting rocks at Mataikona was your inspiration? Mum and Dad.

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    1. It was the same type of rock but it was bigger and gold. ~ Quinn

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  3. Great stuff Quinn. Luv Uncle Sturrock & Aunty Jo

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    1. Thank you for looking at my poem! ~ Quinn

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