Friday, 28 March 2014

The Dark Crystal | by Harry


The rock is shining
in the sun
is it a rock
or a crystal?

It has black shiny bits
all over it
they are cold and sharp
and this is all connected
to a rock.

2 comments:

  1. I love your poem Harry, it describes your rock very well. It looks like a geode rock.

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  2. Hi Harry, I enjoyed the atmosphere you created using the words "cold and sharp", just a little bit spooky! Hmm, so what was it I wonder, rock or crystal? Thanks for sharing, Rachael (Niamh's Mum).

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